A Vignette of Two Vendors

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Dec 30, 2011 · 2 min read

I know a woman who sells perfume,
and keeps me apprized of the richest scents in bloom.
Whenever I find my fragrances nearly finished,
I peer into her shop window before the store hours diminish.
Ever ready is she with scents that enliven the air:
Freesia, Jasmine, Vanilla, and Pear.
Finally, when I manage to tear myself away,
the fragrances linger upon me, far from decay.

I then see a man parting from a blacksmith marked,
It seemed on his journey home he embarked,
In a state unfit, unclean and utterly marred,
By the remnants of the burnt metal, almost scarred.
Stumbled did he onto the sidewalk coughing,
Incited by the ash and soot he’d been inhaling.
Shaking hands with passersby,
Who wiped their hands clean on the sly.

When I got home, I realized that it saddened me to see,
That this man’s merchant does not do for him what mine does for me.

The Prophet Muhammad (may Allah’s peace and blessings upon him) said: “A good friend and a bad friend are like a perfume-seller and a blacksmith: The perfume-seller might give you some perfume as a gift, or you might buy some from him, or at least you might smell its fragrance. As for the blacksmith, he might singe your clothes, and at the very least you will breathe in the fumes of the furnace” (Sahih al-Bukhari and Muslim).

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9 Responses to "A Vignette of Two Vendors"

  1. RZ says:

    Subhaan Allah. I love that hadith. I love the poem. I dont know what to say. Ma sha Allah. <3

  2. Arif Kabir says:

    This was definitely a very enjoyable piece. 

    I imagined myself in Scotland, seeing a homeless man swathed in dark clothing on the other side of the cobbled street, standing in front of a colorful flower shop :) 

    Random, I’m sure, but that’s the first scene that came to my mind.

  3. Aziza says:

    Great poem, MashaAllah! From the beginning I was wondering…is this an illustration of that beautiful hadith? And sure enough, it was! :)

  4. Anonymous says:

    Everything fit together, and I liked how you based it off the hadith. Very nice. :)
    Masha Allah, I love it.

  5. Sarah says:

    This is really beautiful! I love the illustration :)

  6. Ish says:

    Subhana’Allah. I love the use of classical dialect like “Stumbled did he” instead of writing “He stumbled” in order to align the verbs.  Loved how the poem was tied to the hadith :)

  7. Walid says:

    Awesome piece, keep up the good work 

  8. Ruqaiyya Maryam says:

    This is wonderful! It fits perfectly with the hadeeth and I really like the way youve described the effects of both places. For me it highlights more of the long term affects of visiting such places/having such friends. 

  9. Sanaa says:

     A lovely poem based on a beautiful hadith! Yay perfume vendors <3 

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